1) She writes everything down, that comes to her mind and later on fixes it. 2) Break it down like Lamott (brainstorm) 3) when they give you a topic and then go off topic. 4) We do relate to Kelsey Diaz everything in high school we do copy from google and in college we can't copy from google.
1.) Every writers mind is different to show that nobody is perfect and that people make mistakes while trying to put their own thoughts to make a story come to life with meaning.
2.) Both of our writings are different in ways on how we each collabrtae our thoughts in our mind to embrace the meanings of what we are trying to describe
3.) Both of us have diffuclties in starting to put the words together to make sense of what we are saying. The structure of the writing is some what diffcult and to make the writing better to apply to a person.
4.) Kelsey Diaz has some what of a point that we can relate to in ways that in High School the Curriculum Is less rigorous than in a college class state of mind. Therefore due to the transaction from learning one way to another it can make some type of confusion to a student. In our ways as writers we each demonstrate our ways of learning new ways to improve the writing skills that we will obtain to learn.
1.lamott uses Metacognition to explain that not only having experience in writing, you also have to stress over what to write about because we are all human.
2. my writing process consists of listening to music and having the tv on to help me feel less lonely as i write.
3. to what contributed in writing a shitty draft is that the writer wanted us to know that she also struggles with writing when she needs to though she has years of experience with writing.
4.I would say that i relate to Diaz in that high school was just a lie in teaching us that the professor does not care about the students but in reality he is there to teach and help if you any questions.
1.)He uses metacognition to explain to the reader about what he thinks about shitty first drafts. 2.)How I started my writing process, first I write many reasons dealing with the subject that I was assigned to. Than I do my rough draft and I can eliminate whatever I don't need. Finally I write my eassy adding some vocabulary. 3.)My worst writing draft was when I had a writer's block for the most of he writing process's. I couldn't think of anything to write for three hours straight. 4.)I can related with Diaz because of the fact that when I transferred from high school to college there was a huge gap in knowledge due to the fact that high school teachers did not prepare us for college level work.
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ReplyDelete1) She writes everything down, that comes to her mind and later on fixes it. 2) Break it down like Lamott (brainstorm) 3) when they give you a topic and then go off topic. 4) We do relate to Kelsey Diaz everything in high school we do copy from google and in college we can't copy from google.
ReplyDelete1.) Every writers mind is different to show that nobody is perfect and that people make mistakes while trying to put their own thoughts to make a story come to life with meaning.
ReplyDelete2.) Both of our writings are different in ways on how we each collabrtae our thoughts in our mind to embrace the meanings of what we are trying to describe
3.) Both of us have diffuclties in starting to put the words together to make sense of what we are saying. The structure of the writing is some what diffcult and to make the writing better to apply to a person.
4.) Kelsey Diaz has some what of a point that we can relate to in ways that in High School the Curriculum Is less rigorous than in a college class state of mind. Therefore due to the transaction from learning one way to another it can make some type of confusion to a student. In our ways as writers we each demonstrate our ways of learning new ways to improve the writing skills that we will obtain to learn.
1.lamott uses Metacognition to explain that not only having experience in writing, you also have to stress over what to write about because we are all human.
ReplyDelete2. my writing process consists of listening to music and having the tv on to help me feel less lonely as i write.
3. to what contributed in writing a shitty draft is that the writer wanted us to know that she also struggles with writing when she needs to though she has years of experience with writing.
4.I would say that i relate to Diaz in that high school was just a lie in teaching us that the professor does not care about the students but in reality he is there to teach and help if you any questions.
1.)He uses metacognition to explain to the reader about what he thinks about shitty first drafts.
ReplyDelete2.)How I started my writing process, first I write many reasons dealing with the subject that I was assigned to. Than I do my rough draft and I can eliminate whatever I don't need. Finally I write my eassy adding some vocabulary.
3.)My worst writing draft was when I had a writer's block for the most of he writing process's. I couldn't think of anything to write for three hours straight.
4.)I can related with Diaz because of the fact that when I transferred from high school to college there was a huge gap in knowledge due to the fact that high school teachers did not prepare us for college level work.